This is an interesting piece and I like the emotive feel of it. There is a lot of negative space and manly I think this is do from the distance of the shot and the angle. A shot angle from low down to the ground with the same pose and close would have made for a more dramatic piece. There is also an extreme amount of darkness and not enough contrast of light.
ah, but sadly a shot from lower ground would have exposed the buildings and the highway.. i think it would have completely ruined the mood.. thank you for your advice, i dont see much of that kind around here